Firstly I congratulate you on realeasing your debut ,magnum opus..work !!! "I just finished reading your novella, and I'm still reeling from the emotional impact. The story can best be described as the story ( narrated in first person omniscient)of one family's resilience and love and collective persuit of their loved one's Dream to be a writer. Moreover a story not just of surviving but of growing stronger through ever challenges. The tragic unexpected departure of Param, then tragic ending of the protagonist, a young and talented writer, left me heartbroken. However, what resonated with me deeply was the way you portrayed her spirit and soul surviving till the very end. Despite facing multiple challenges and setbacks, the protagonist's passion for writing and her determination to leave a mark on the world shone through. Her character arc and bond with family members was expertly crafted, and I found myself invested in her journey from the very beginning. The themes of resilience, hope, and the transformative power of art were woven throughout the narrative with skill and sensitivity. The writing itself was evocative and immersive, with vivid descriptions and poignant dialogue. What struck me most, though, was the way you conveyed the protagonist's unwavering commitment to her craft, even in the face of adversity. *Sneha's* story serves as a testament to the enduring power of creativity and the human spirit despite all odds of materialistic world as you beautifully carved out in your *literacy masterpiece* . While the ending was undoubtedly tragic, I appreciated how you offered a sense of hope and continuity. The protagonist's legacy lives on through her writing, and that's a truly beautiful and uplifting message. Overall, I think you've crafted a compelling and emotionally resonant story that will stay with readers long after they finish reading. I still remember some epic lines of the story beautifuly pen down by you. ?️ .Fate has its own way of unfolding. ?️.I miss you Param,The room felt too big ,too empty without him( Unexpected departure of Param and the line followed it) ?️.Both had been good at masking their feelings for each other .( Portraing the bond between Sneha &Dadi,Sneha & Param). ?️.When you desire something with great intensity,the whole universe conspires to help you to achieve it. ?️. Writing turns pain into power.(Clever use of rhetorical device) ?️.The silence in the room was very loud.( Witty and apt use of blend of oxymoron and personification ) ?️.For the soul there is neither birth nor death.( Such more enlightening references of *The Bhagwat Geeta* . Well done!" And May God bless you with such continual spirit of creating such more great literacy masterpieces. Regards