In the flicker of a candle flame, an old woman with wise, weathered eyes begins to weave a tale of her youth. She speaks softly, her words laced with both nostalgia and trepidation, as she recounts the most harrowing moments of her childhood.

• Total Chapters: 12 Chapters.
• Format: Stories
• Language: English
• Category: Literature & Fiction
• Tags: Old Woman , Murder, Mystery,
• Published Date: 28-Apr-2023

INTRODUCTION

BIRTHDAY PARTY

A STRANGE GIFT

THE UNUSUAL EVENTS

THE INVESTIGATION

THE DOWNFALL

INJUSTICE

THE TRUTH

WHAT IS INSIDE THE BOX?

THE ANSWERS

HOW DID HE FIND OUT?

WHY?

User Rating

Shaurya

28-Apr-2023

Very good story! End can be improved a little bit

Prabhakar

28-Apr-2023

Good suspense.

Vivek Kumar

28-Apr-2023

Excellent story.. but if you can add some more events and plot twists adding more characters..

Rahul Mehra

28-Apr-2023

Great Suspense.. Every person has their best way to end a story , I am just giving my opinion. What if the reader after reading the story himself/herself comes to know that the killer is the father of that girl ? You should not give direct introduction of killer. Then it may becomes more suspenseful at the end.

Ritu Raj

28-Apr-2023

Very Nice Story..Some twist should be needed and climax or ending can be better btw....Nice try Keep going✌️?

Anuj

29-Apr-2023

Nice story