She had felt left out, deceived by life,but the first shower of monsoon had put an end to that melancholy. A comeback with a grace so immaculate..the tears to merge with the water falling on her cheeks,to provide an infinite tranquility to the soul.

• Total Chapters: 1 Chapters.
• Format: Stories
• Language: English
• Category: Other (Books)
• Tags: #monsoon,
• Published Date: 26-Jul-2023

A Beautiful Comeback

User Rating

Sakshi

26-Jul-2023

It was mesmerizing and beautiful. I loved the rhythm you created.

Puneet Makkar

26-Jul-2023

Vibha

27-Jul-2023

The dance in wild abandon has been beautifully presented! Enjoyed reading the so well rhymed words

Namita Kanwar

27-Jul-2023

Beautifully expressed the freedom from the inner turmoil and positivity depicted by the carefree dance in the rain

Neeta chawla

27-Jul-2023

I enjoyed reading your book so well.

Renu Malik

27-Jul-2023

Very Nice write up.Mesmerising ??

Aditya rishi

27-Jul-2023

It's a very lovely poem,I really liked the way poem has been expressed.

Siddhi

27-Jul-2023

Siddhi

27-Jul-2023

A beautiful poem it is l really loved the rhyming words ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Sangeeta

28-Jul-2023

Very subtle ,and soft poem The turmoil within which is mellowed down by the rain and happiness and joy has been expressed beautifully ??

Sunil Malik

28-Jul-2023

Very beautiful poem????

daksh

29-Jul-2023

Nice Poem?

Rumi

29-Jul-2023

Owsem poem

shireen singh

03-Aug-2023

But she had realised , Life's meant to be lived ?

Amarjit Singh

04-Aug-2023

Simply beautiful!

RAGHAV AGARWAL

06-Aug-2023

The metaphor of rain washing away pain and rejuvenating the soul is both saddening and uplifting as if one is truly immersed in the moment . Really well written Ma'am !!

Angel poptani

07-Aug-2023

This poem is lovely as well as fascinating. I loved how you created the rhythm